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Re: Critique

Post by Koeyohte » Sat Dec 05, 2009 3:43 pm

Matter of opinions ;) I really, really dislike the music in scene 2... haha. But seems that most people don't mind it, so yeah... but seriously, piano for a hunt scene? It was kind of peaceful like you said... what was on the trailer on the site I thought was pretty nice. But that is just me and I am commonly the minority ^^'

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Re: Critique

Post by SilverLuna » Mon Dec 07, 2009 1:29 am

You know what would be fun for scene 2? ;)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=naXX2JQpLu4
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Re: Critique

Post by KanuTGL » Mon Dec 07, 2009 8:32 am

Haha! XD Yes, Silver, it would :P
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Re: Critique

Post by Marji4x » Mon Dec 07, 2009 12:18 pm

OH MAN I will second that!!!
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Re: Critique

Post by Uzuri » Mon Dec 07, 2009 12:26 pm

*accidentally snorts an entire brownie*

And all I had to do was see the name of the piece.
Zib, go suffer for your art.

Wait. 20 and 20 and 20 is not 50!

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There's a difference between the Electric Slide and a ballet.

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Re: Critique

Post by ecco » Mon Dec 07, 2009 12:33 pm

dear god.
i hate this song.
its being used in THREE different adverts on TV at the SAME TIME.

if there was ever a classical piece to get sick of, this is it. u_u;;

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Re: Critique

Post by Marji4x » Mon Dec 07, 2009 12:54 pm

Uzuri wrote:*gives Marj village idiot hat*
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Re: Critique

Post by ecco » Mon Dec 07, 2009 3:55 pm

ahahaha thats the best wolf doodle ever :cheese:

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Re: Critique

Post by SilverLuna » Mon Dec 07, 2009 11:57 pm

xDDDDDDDDD!!!!!! Marji!! that made me laugh sooo hard!! Yeah, sure, that little thing can hurt something xD

How about this? xD
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-bzWSJG93P8

OH NO HERE COMES THE WOLFFIESSS!!!! Poor Wilson... :(
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Re: Critique

Post by Marji4x » Tue Dec 08, 2009 11:48 am

That would be so awesome XD!
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Re: Critique

Post by Uzuri » Tue Dec 08, 2009 11:57 am

Silver... I am your father.

Er... yeah, Dad, I knew that.

Boy have we gone off-topic XD I should hit myself with the stick.
Zib, go suffer for your art.

Wait. 20 and 20 and 20 is not 50!

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Re: Critique

Post by ecco » Tue Dec 08, 2009 6:36 pm

allow me! +chases Uz with a stick+ :cheese:

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Re: Critique

Post by Koeyohte » Sun Jan 17, 2010 2:32 pm

Oh geeze I forgot to come and se ethis XD Ride of the Valkaries would be soooo funny haha :) Should do a remix of it as a teaser trailer (literally, a teaser) XD

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Re: Critique

Post by Forbidding » Sat Feb 27, 2010 6:07 pm

I understand that Shadow is not all jumpy and giddy but he could look a little more lively, I.E His expression could change into that of concentration rather than just flicking his ears.
Shadow I think is suppose to be hard to read and his actions very percise. Maby to give him more movement instead of just the ears flicking he could raise his head slightly.
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Re: Critique

Post by Uzuri » Sat Feb 27, 2010 6:26 pm

We're starting to go beyond critique and into nitpicking here. I know I asked for crit, but we're overreaching a bit here. If you get down to the point where you're trying to tell an animator which body part to move... that's nitpicking.

(And yeah, it's been going on for a while, Forbidding, so that's not aimed directly at you :) )
Zib, go suffer for your art.

Wait. 20 and 20 and 20 is not 50!

Most men with nothing would rather protect the possibility of being rich than face the reality of being poor. --from "1776"

There's a difference between the Electric Slide and a ballet.

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