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 Post subject: Jack Animation
PostPosted: Thu Mar 24, 2011 12:32 am 
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my first animation in a long time.. ick.. Please give me some constructive criticism! I want to become an animator for the film sometime and critique is the best way to learn :) http://frodo-lion.deviantart.com/art/Jack-is-Cheesy-Animation-202101401


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 Post subject: Re: Jack Animation
PostPosted: Thu Mar 24, 2011 10:35 pm 
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That's really good! But I would say that the neck part, as soon as he lifts his head is a bit off. It kind of slaps onto him. But other than that, ot's really great :) Better than I can do :S My animations always come out wacky.

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 Post subject: Re: Jack Animation
PostPosted: Thu Mar 24, 2011 11:25 pm 
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thanks for the crit! Can you explain which part of his neck please? I want to learn!


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Frodo Fox wrote:
thanks for the crit! Can you explain which part of his neck please? I want to learn!


The part on his chest. There's kind of a tuft of fur there, that disappears, and then there's a line on his neck that like, suddenly forms there. :)

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